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very descriptive and full of emotion. this work is very well done. You did well by writing it in the same chaotic fashion that the man was thinking in. these are moments in writing that should be cherished for the drama they hold, and not just skipped over in one brief paragraph. excellent work.
posted by
draco101
on October 10, 2007 at 1:24 AM
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you have good writing skills
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on October 4, 2007 at 1:43 PM
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