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i love the way you take things you see and hear and weave them together to

tell a story, and if you make people cry well you have told the story well.

posted by callista22001 on September 23, 2007 at 7:27 AM | link to this | reply

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Thanks, Dave! High praise indeed. I am honoured that you would wish to keep track of this offering.

posted by AmMused on September 19, 2007 at 4:22 AM | link to this | reply

A brilliant ballad, Alice. I loved the way your creativity has fused your own experience with the news story and made it into a dramatic tale. I'm going to link this one in my Blogit Gold Dust blog, if you don't mind. It's where I store stuff I'd like to return to. Cheers. Great writing. Best thing I've read this week so far. And I've read quite a few good pieces too.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on September 19, 2007 at 4:15 AM | link to this | reply

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Thanks for stopping by. Appreciate it. AmMused

posted by AmMused on September 19, 2007 at 3:53 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Great post - it certainly had the ring of truth and makes a good point.

Thanks for your comments and stopping by. AmMused.

posted by AmMused on September 19, 2007 at 3:53 AM | link to this | reply

Re: i enjoyed this!!!!! great job!!!

Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for stopping by. AmMused

posted by AmMused on September 19, 2007 at 3:51 AM | link to this | reply

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Thanks for your comments. Glad you enjoyed. AmMused

posted by AmMused on September 19, 2007 at 3:51 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Interesting read !

I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks for stopping by.

posted by AmMused on September 19, 2007 at 3:50 AM | link to this | reply

Real incidents

Real incidents are often probably stranger than fiction. Thanks for stopping by with your comments. I appreciate that. AmMused

posted by AmMused on September 19, 2007 at 3:49 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Kabu on September 19, 2007 at 2:02 AM | link to this | reply

Great post - it certainly had the ring of truth and makes a good point.

posted by Antonionioni on September 18, 2007 at 11:01 AM | link to this | reply

AmMused

What a wonderful (albeit sad) story and a reminder that you can't judge a book by it's cover. It may be fictional but it rings of so many truths.

posted by Troosha on September 18, 2007 at 9:23 AM | link to this | reply