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A comment if I may.
The story is good, but the black background is just too much for my eyes to handle, especially with the scarlet text. Good use of dialogue. -Cent
posted by
Cent
on November 30, 2007 at 3:32 AM
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*wonderfully written*
that was very interesting and i'm on edge to know what happens next. don't keep me in suspense too long. :-D
posted by
serenity420
on August 31, 2007 at 12:12 AM
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d_m
I like it, but I'm not a professional writer...
posted by
Enigmatic68
on August 30, 2007 at 8:02 PM
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