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A comment if I may.
The story is good, but the black background is just too much for my eyes to handle, especially with the scarlet text. Good use of dialogue. -Cent

posted by Cent on November 30, 2007 at 3:32 AM | link to this | reply

*wonderfully written*
that was very interesting and i'm on edge to know what happens next.  don't keep me in suspense too long.  :-D 

posted by serenity420 on August 31, 2007 at 12:12 AM | link to this | reply

d_m
I like it, but I'm not a professional writer...

posted by Enigmatic68 on August 30, 2007 at 8:02 PM | link to this | reply