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posted by PoetRaye on August 26, 2007 at 9:02 PM | link to this | reply

posted by _teddypoet_ on August 26, 2007 at 5:59 PM | link to this | reply

Hello, Circuit - Good to see you

Thank you.

posted by PoetRaye on August 25, 2007 at 5:51 AM | link to this | reply

powerful, RaeS

posted by circuit on August 25, 2007 at 5:45 AM | link to this | reply

Good Morning, OTA

Thank you.

posted by PoetRaye on August 25, 2007 at 5:32 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent Raes.  ~Peace, OTA

posted by OTA. on August 25, 2007 at 5:13 AM | link to this | reply

Hello, DM - Thank you very much

posted by PoetRaye on August 25, 2007 at 5:12 AM | link to this | reply

such strong, raw words...excellently written

posted by dark_mistress_again on August 24, 2007 at 11:57 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Drohan

posted by PoetRaye on August 24, 2007 at 10:10 PM | link to this | reply

very strong and sad Reas

posted by drohan254 on August 24, 2007 at 5:16 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Afzal

posted by PoetRaye on August 24, 2007 at 11:33 AM | link to this | reply

Actually Troosha, a brew of both..

Some days the atmosphere external matches too perfectly the internal misery.

I think tears are as rain..hopefully..before long, peace & mildness filter back in and out, hopefully.

on that cheery note, Thank you...:)

posted by PoetRaye on August 24, 2007 at 11:32 AM | link to this | reply

Rae

I confess until I read Justi's comment you had me stumped on this one - I could decided if it was a piece about inner or outer heat/pain.  It served a good punch - in that, there is no doubt. 

posted by Troosha on August 24, 2007 at 11:21 AM | link to this | reply

Highly intense and powerful !

posted by afzal50 on August 24, 2007 at 11:14 AM | link to this | reply

Oh, Justi, ugh...about day 5 for above normal here

I know the dog days of August and all that, but each summer our air quality in high temperatures gets progressively worse - quite a few people ill from just minimal exposure. Sounds bad there, too...Keep cool and take care, Dear Friend...and Thank you!

posted by PoetRaye on August 24, 2007 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

RaeS

This says it. We are 31 days into a major heat wave. We have had a temp hovering from 102º-104º all week we are expecting 100º which believe it or not will give us some relief. Such a great poem I can see the waves going almost.

posted by Justi on August 24, 2007 at 8:42 AM | link to this | reply

Good Morning, Ariala

Thank you - burning here today, as in many areas - a record breaking 102 degrees forecast - hellish..

posted by PoetRaye on August 24, 2007 at 7:37 AM | link to this | reply

Intense words and feelings

posted by Ariala on August 24, 2007 at 7:34 AM | link to this | reply