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thanks for reading eyehaveears

posted by drohan254 on October 5, 2007 at 4:07 AM | link to this | reply

Enjoyed this read, along with others.

Bless

 

posted by eyeshaveears470 on October 2, 2007 at 2:35 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Waterfalling on September 13, 2007 at 3:03 PM | link to this | reply

hi dave ,thanks for asking friend

posted by drohan254 on September 5, 2007 at 11:56 AM | link to this | reply

Hope you're doing OK.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on September 4, 2007 at 3:45 AM | link to this | reply

night majik ...thank you dear

posted by drohan254 on August 29, 2007 at 12:22 PM | link to this | reply

glad you liked it teddy ,thanks friend

posted by drohan254 on August 29, 2007 at 12:21 PM | link to this | reply

dave thanks friend

posted by drohan254 on August 29, 2007 at 12:20 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice
I particularly love the punctuation you used in this

posted by NightMajik on August 29, 2007 at 5:19 AM | link to this | reply

Remarkable work, drohan...excellent...

posted by teddypoet_ on August 29, 2007 at 12:13 AM | link to this | reply

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on August 28, 2007 at 8:43 AM | link to this | reply

tattered night ,thanks friend

posted by drohan254 on August 28, 2007 at 2:06 AM | link to this | reply

thanks dear Reas ,it means to me alot

posted by drohan254 on August 28, 2007 at 2:05 AM | link to this | reply

drohan
Wonderful!

posted by Tattered_Knight on August 27, 2007 at 9:58 PM | link to this | reply

Melodic and marvelous verse, Drohan! ~ Thank you, it is deeply affecting

posted by katray4 on August 27, 2007 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: yes, it's me......not a man

posted by star4sky5 on August 26, 2007 at 4:46 PM | link to this | reply

carl ..thanks friend

posted by drohan254 on August 26, 2007 at 3:47 PM | link to this | reply

Flowing and wistful
Nice job!


Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on August 26, 2007 at 3:03 PM | link to this | reply

Taps .thank you much ,very glad that you liked it

posted by drohan254 on August 26, 2007 at 10:34 AM | link to this | reply

7 star ,is that are you ,i said who is good man ,thanks dear

posted by drohan254 on August 26, 2007 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply

thanks dear najwa for the beautiful words

posted by drohan254 on August 26, 2007 at 10:32 AM | link to this | reply

afzal ..thank you so much

posted by drohan254 on August 26, 2007 at 10:31 AM | link to this | reply

drohan
A magnificent piece of writing.  Beautiful style and expression.

posted by TAPS. on August 26, 2007 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply

I signed to read you again
HAPPY SUNDAY

posted by star4sky5 on August 26, 2007 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

And the eyes colored into their Brown
Full with clear fresh fall running down
For many years the dream to be there
But the sad heart has no where
Love is the only road we can walk
It creates strength as stem from Oak
But in the soul too many tears
For ever one wheel spinning over the years
That beauty in Us inside our Souls
And had never been in true Fall
It is all Dreams living in all
    ================
     You inspired me into new words
         it is gift to you from
            THE STRANGER
                 

posted by NAJWA on August 25, 2007 at 7:35 AM | link to this | reply

It's beautiful and well -written.

posted by afzal50 on August 24, 2007 at 5:50 PM | link to this | reply

FOLIAGE GOLD ..GLAD THAT YOU LIKED IT

posted by drohan254 on August 24, 2007 at 5:28 PM | link to this | reply

THANKS DEAR  PELAQUS FOR READING

posted by drohan254 on August 24, 2007 at 5:26 PM | link to this | reply

THANKS DEAR MISTRESS

posted by drohan254 on August 24, 2007 at 5:25 PM | link to this | reply

drohan254 - Hooray another drohan254 poem! This was so lovely and
peaceful and that last line really does sum it all up.  Well done!

posted by FoliageGold on August 24, 2007 at 6:04 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful!

posted by pelagus on August 24, 2007 at 5:17 AM | link to this | reply

that was so heartfelt and wonderfully written

posted by dark_mistress_again on August 23, 2007 at 5:47 PM | link to this | reply

posted by drohan254 on August 23, 2007 at 5:49 PM | link to this | reply

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