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Decshak,stop being cynical. There are still some girls who have
self-respect,who wait.  its not that novel a concept if you look in the right places.....

posted by proc on August 22, 2007 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

fantastic work. rich characters and lovely build-up of atmosphere.

posted by proc on August 22, 2007 at 6:59 PM | link to this | reply

I feel I don't quite trust virgins. In the back of my mind I think, "They
got to be shitting me."

posted by WindTapper on August 22, 2007 at 6:28 PM | link to this | reply

Great work, Dark!
Glad to see you back. Just catching up with some of these.

posted by strat on August 22, 2007 at 1:39 PM | link to this | reply

dark
I hope you are planning on writng a book of somekind this is great

posted by Lanetay on August 22, 2007 at 12:04 PM | link to this | reply

Dark
Loved it!  Such a vivid description of the girl/woman. 

posted by Troosha on August 22, 2007 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

Captivating work, DM!

posted by Katray2 on August 22, 2007 at 5:19 AM | link to this | reply

Look forward to more!

posted by Antonionioni on August 22, 2007 at 4:53 AM | link to this | reply

Fantastic work, dm...the way your words danse keeps the reader thirsting
for more...very cool storyline indeed!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 22, 2007 at 1:31 AM | link to this | reply