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Re: cpklapper

Hi TAPS,

We have JMO to thank for the wonderful Spanish translation of "I am serenading you".  Be sure to check out his poetry, both Spanish and English.

Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on August 30, 2007 at 10:03 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, Dave between the periods...

Somehow that didn't come out right.

posted by cpklapper on August 26, 2007 at 5:53 AM | link to this | reply

cpklapper

A very touching piece of poetry my friend, well done........

posted by WileyJohn on August 25, 2007 at 5:24 PM | link to this | reply

touching

posted by spanish_dragon on August 25, 2007 at 5:11 PM | link to this | reply

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a nice one for that certain someone

posted by lustorlove on August 23, 2007 at 6:36 PM | link to this | reply

cp

Very nice!

posted by Nautikos on August 23, 2007 at 1:51 PM | link to this | reply

cpklapper

I really enjoyed getting caught up.  Very nice Spanish translation.  I read it aloud because I love the sounds de la lengua de Español.

posted by TAPS. on August 22, 2007 at 8:15 PM | link to this | reply

Good one CPK.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on August 22, 2007 at 3:12 AM | link to this | reply

Re: That is so beautiful CPK.

Thank you, Kabu.  It is getting late and I am thinking of another corny remake of the Kilmer classic where I tell my love:

I think that I shall never see,
A poem beautiful as thee

And, of course, I mean it and I am a sappy mess of adulation.

posted by cpklapper on August 21, 2007 at 8:14 PM | link to this | reply

That is so beautiful CPK.

posted by Kabu on August 21, 2007 at 7:52 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Making love....

Thank you, OneBetty.  Now if that someone and I could manage to get together.  I love her so much.

posted by cpklapper on August 21, 2007 at 7:42 PM | link to this | reply

Re: i like it a lot

Thank you, pelagus.  I wrote it, thinking of her for whom I both lust and love.

posted by cpklapper on August 21, 2007 at 7:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nice work - like it.

Thanks, Tony.

posted by cpklapper on August 21, 2007 at 7:31 PM | link to this | reply

Making love....

Beautiful; what a lucky someone!

posted by OneBetty on August 20, 2007 at 8:16 PM | link to this | reply

i like it a lot

very nice mix of lust & love.

posted by pelagus on August 19, 2007 at 9:23 PM | link to this | reply

Nice work - like it.

posted by Antonionioni on August 19, 2007 at 12:25 PM | link to this | reply