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oh so lovely this is like a love letter
Simply lovely  Simply                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Cee

posted by LadyCeeMarie on May 2, 2008 at 2:07 AM | link to this | reply

posted by star4sky5 on October 20, 2007 at 6:30 PM | link to this | reply

where are you mr poet.

posted by proc on August 16, 2007 at 4:31 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful

posted by star4sky5 on August 10, 2007 at 9:43 PM | link to this | reply

Stunning
I so love this sonnet.........

posted by dreamchameleon on August 10, 2007 at 3:14 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful sonnet my friend
it seems there is no end to your talents

posted by mariaki on August 10, 2007 at 2:33 AM | link to this | reply

durbin
Very nice, wistful sonnet, and some important questions.. well done.

posted by mneme on August 10, 2007 at 2:33 AM | link to this | reply

Durbin - Please?

posted by FoliageGold on August 9, 2007 at 10:32 PM | link to this | reply

I'm to blame for the typo Joy! Mary (Mary Louise)
U must have guessed it was my excitement in seeing you around...and my fingers misclicked

posted by salem8 on August 9, 2007 at 10:29 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Mary! Lousie? Durbin, no. I cry.
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posted by FoliageGold on August 9, 2007 at 10:16 PM | link to this | reply

Durbin?
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posted by FoliageGold on August 9, 2007 at 10:15 PM | link to this | reply

Mary! Lousie?
I am back ... SIX FLAGS with the students tomorrow. Staring at 10.30 am. So I can play a little longer...Alelujah! Are you fine now?

posted by salem8 on August 9, 2007 at 10:14 PM | link to this | reply

Durbin?

posted by FoliageGold on August 9, 2007 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

May as well put my list out there-will not be able to return until Fri nite

Word list for puzzle with "FREEHOLDER" or "F R E E H O L D E R":

1-10  : LORD, freehold, freeholder, freer, here, hold, holder, feed, feeder, hole

-- 20 : role, dole, doled, dreer, doer, holed, reef, refer, fold, folder

--30 : rode, freed, fore, lode, hode, heed, reed, leer, leered, lore

--40 : FREE, deer, hoed (past of to hoe), flee, fled, redo (do again) elder, feld, feel, feeler

--41  : older

posted by salem8 on August 9, 2007 at 9:30 PM | link to this | reply

Exquisite poem !

posted by afzal50 on August 9, 2007 at 6:22 PM | link to this | reply

Durbin, amazing sonnet.....loving words.
Your thoughts and meaning shall not go unnoticed thank you dear friend.

posted by Irish3 on August 9, 2007 at 5:06 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Good news.Regular winner FoliageGold suggested FREEHOLDER as next puzzle
Durbin....lovely beautiful words and heartfelt....thank you so much friend. knowingfriendscarematters Shalom

posted by Irish3 on August 9, 2007 at 5:04 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Durbs - are you named after the anti-war senator?
Anyway, enough about senators, what about sonneteers? This is an interesting one, again on the topic of flowers, but also it seems to me to be about life and beauty still surviving despite setbacks. Good work! And good pix too.

posted by Antonionioni on August 9, 2007 at 3:55 PM | link to this | reply

fantastic Durbin. How you been?

posted by proc on August 9, 2007 at 3:26 PM | link to this | reply

Good news.Regular winner FoliageGold suggested FREEHOLDER as next puzzle

Thanks Mary--other suggestions are still welcome and will be used in the order they are recived, unless they will yield to few words of 4+ letters (35 minimum for each puzzle).

 

shalomandcourgaethroughgodslove

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/209/516157977_03fba89b86.jpg?v=0

posted by salem8 on August 9, 2007 at 2:36 PM | link to this | reply

http://re3.mm-a4.yimg.com/image/3029225458

posted by salem8 on August 9, 2007 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

thanks Dave. glad you came to visit. Do U have a good word for next puzzle?

http://www.odla.nu/f_s/images/tn_pentalinon_luteum.jpg

posted by salem8 on August 9, 2007 at 2:01 PM | link to this | reply

Hey Durbs, well sonnetified in flowery gorgeousness.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on August 9, 2007 at 1:57 PM | link to this | reply

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