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Cracking last two lines! Great piece. Keep going....
posted by
SpencerStreetStation
on August 14, 2007 at 1:38 AM
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now you are cookin.
yeah yeah and yeah , say what you feel , feel what you say
it makes such for a great fuckin' day, Hey Young Lady , it is great to see you enter the other regions of your mind and sharing with us a glimpse inside .KEEP IT UP !!!!!!!
posted by
twomany
on August 10, 2007 at 10:46 PM
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Hey thanks to all for the compliments
and I fixed line nine thanks
posted by
spanish_dragon
on August 9, 2007 at 6:41 PM
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Cool...good poem!
posted by
dark_mistress_again
on August 8, 2007 at 11:37 PM
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dragon--
I thought this was dark but very well written. You might want to fix the typo in your ninth line, though.
posted by
Julia.
on August 8, 2007 at 10:21 PM
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spanish
very deep dear
posted by
Lanetay
on August 8, 2007 at 9:23 PM
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It's nice and lovely . WEll written!
posted by
afzal50
on August 8, 2007 at 6:20 PM
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