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I like it
Hi my friend,
I like it just the way it is.
Damon
posted by
Damond
on August 7, 2007 at 1:18 PM
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Oh WHAT a tourist attraction the MOON would be!!!!
posted by
WindTapper
on August 7, 2007 at 10:09 AM
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Thanks to you all - glad you liked!
This was one of those occasions when you don't know how it's going to end until you get there. In retrospect I would make a few changes. The first two journeys sound fairly environmentally-friendly - i.e. they are not aeroplane journeys - but the end refers to climate change, or maybe it's just the disappearance of hope, of love rather than a ban on holiday travel. But if I could write it again I would make the carbon foot print idea a bit stronger in the earlier stages. But I can't rewrite, unless i rewrite on the same day, and it's too late for that now! The sound and style of it was probably inspired by me having listened to some folk music the night before!
posted by
Antonionioni
on August 5, 2007 at 9:40 AM
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You deserve to follow your heart--shall we pray that U&LadyofYour Heart go
away a-traveling? (Your music came forth and took away the sonnet on another celestial travel) shalom and GodMorning...remember the Sabbath and Keep it Holy my friends. I ask this in the Precious Name of Jesus Christ, Amen.
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 5, 2007 at 3:22 AM
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what an awesome little sonnet!!! have a great weekend!!
posted by
dark_mistress_again
on August 4, 2007 at 11:49 PM
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That was weird man.
But good weird. First, all the sudden cheese? Then the trick ending. Did you borrow inspiration for that? Just get that feeling. i mean, i borrow, not a lot, but it's not a bad thing. um, shut up pat, um, ok...
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 4, 2007 at 8:41 PM
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Antonio
To a graveyard, where it's (sometimes) peaceful...
posted by
Enigmatic68
on August 4, 2007 at 12:40 PM
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nice, nice repetitions!
but hopefully some "no" turn into YES!! 
posted by
pelagus
on August 4, 2007 at 10:03 AM
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The repetition made such beautiful effect, and so was the let down in the
end. Marvellously said, Tony.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 4, 2007 at 9:29 AM
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Antonio-yo-yo - You ARE going on holiday, yes? This was lovely.
I really enjoyed the repeating of the My Love part. Made me smile. Enjoy your day!
posted by
FoliageGold
on August 4, 2007 at 7:55 AM
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Great poem.....Take care - see ya soon.
LOL
posted by
_Symphony_
on August 4, 2007 at 7:39 AM
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I wish you the same .
posted by
afzal50
on August 4, 2007 at 5:58 AM
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Antonionioni....lovely and fun....
a bright sunny sonnet full of wonder and thought....hopefully plans are revised as all should have a vacation....Have a nice weekend thanks for sharing.
posted by
Irish3
on August 4, 2007 at 5:48 AM
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Hi Tony it is your weekend so take your sweet heart to the first flight and read my song it is gift for you and her inspired by you,,,,,,,,,yr friend the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on August 4, 2007 at 4:37 AM
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Good Morning Tony---wonderfull musical piece! I thought you were going to
Suffolk?-Why go anywhere else? Ha Ha--have a great weekend.chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 4, 2007 at 3:42 AM
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The moon
The moon Antonio, the moon... no need for tickets to get there...
posted by
nemonemo
on August 4, 2007 at 3:19 AM
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