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Damond

I wish he'll be stronger and move on with his life.

Cheers

posted by La_Paloma on August 7, 2007 at 2:13 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I find it sometimes hard to believe that this is not true for you

mariaki, thank you so much.  I shall have to post a few of my happier ones.  I really do have some.

Thanks again for commenting.

Damon

posted by Damond on August 3, 2007 at 6:47 AM | link to this | reply

I find it sometimes hard to believe that this is not true for you
you do it so well!  Thank you

posted by mariaki on August 3, 2007 at 5:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I'm glad to read (in comments) that this is fictional

Hi Julia,

Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting.

Damon

posted by Damond on August 2, 2007 at 10:18 PM | link to this | reply

I'm glad to read (in comments) that this is fictional
I would not wish that sadness on anyone!

posted by Julia. on August 2, 2007 at 8:48 PM | link to this | reply

Re: well written, but so sad,

callista, thanks so much for commenting on this one.

Damon

posted by Damond on August 2, 2007 at 6:27 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Damond - Aw, tell him to smile it will help. Nice work.

Thank you Mary.  Be back by your pages in a little while.

Damon

posted by Damond on August 2, 2007 at 6:04 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Life is full of gifts and bounties you just have to wait patiently .

Afzal, thanks so much.

Damon

posted by Damond on August 2, 2007 at 6:02 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Damond

Troosha, thanks for commenting on this one.  I really don't need another, as this is completely fiction.

Damon D.

posted by Damond on August 2, 2007 at 6:00 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Good post, Damond. Sad, but well done. Write on...

saul_relative Thank you I tend to write a lot of sad ones.  I don't know why, as I am truly a happy man uless it is because of the influence of country music.  I love country music especially sad ones. Hank Williams Sr. is my all time favorite.

Damon

posted by Damond on August 2, 2007 at 5:58 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Damon....gotta stop givin a girl tears....

Irish, thank you for commenting.  I love your comments, but of course you know that my wife and I are happily married and have been for to many years to consider breaking up even if things weren't going right.

Thanks again!

Damon

posted by Damond on August 2, 2007 at 5:55 PM | link to this | reply

well written, but so sad,
some loves we never get over, but with time we learn how to enjoy life again.

posted by jeansaw on August 2, 2007 at 1:37 PM | link to this | reply

Damond - Aw, tell him to smile it will help. Nice work.

posted by FoliageGold on August 2, 2007 at 1:27 PM | link to this | reply

Life is full of gifts and bounties you just have to wait patiently .

posted by afzal50 on August 2, 2007 at 10:00 AM | link to this | reply

Damond
There will be another.  All in good time....  

posted by Troosha on August 2, 2007 at 8:55 AM | link to this | reply

Good post, Damond. Sad, but well done. Write on...

posted by saul_relative on August 2, 2007 at 8:02 AM | link to this | reply

Damon....gotta stop givin a girl tears....
abandoned love....promise of hearts united unkept....so sad, and lonely....but she'll surely realize her error and come back kind sir.....( my happy ending) thank you this is lovely as it is

posted by Irish3 on August 2, 2007 at 8:00 AM | link to this | reply