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Oh dear, Troosha! You didn't realise just how trivial it really was!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 26, 2007 at 9:55 AM
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Fooled me too!
you prankster, you.......
posted by
Troosha
on July 26, 2007 at 4:54 AM
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Fooled you, Madam - ha ha!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 26, 2007 at 4:15 AM
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Yes, Mariaki - but It's still legal so I think you may get away with it!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 26, 2007 at 4:14 AM
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hahaha great poem.....I did not expect the ending.
posted by
_Symphony_
on July 26, 2007 at 3:21 AM
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Although I don't have the same sentiment
when I do the dirty deed - spose that make me an onion killer e?
posted by
mariaki
on July 26, 2007 at 2:32 AM
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Thanks Dave - put the kettle on then!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 26, 2007 at 12:35 AM
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Sannhet - it would make an interesting read!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 26, 2007 at 12:31 AM
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Thanks Afzal - nice of you to say!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 26, 2007 at 12:30 AM
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Ah, I like the final couplet that throws you back into the poem to re-examine what you thought you'd worked out. A real onionverse for Whysper to check out. Loved it. Plath & Ibsen knocking at my door.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on July 26, 2007 at 12:30 AM
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Hi MAry - oops, thanks!! Glad you liked - what a strange coincidence it was
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 26, 2007 at 12:30 AM
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Tony -
I'm not sure I am ready to admit to all of the things I have done to an onion in my life . . .
posted by
sannhet
on July 25, 2007 at 9:26 PM
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WEll written ! It shows how writing skill works !
posted by
afzal50
on July 25, 2007 at 5:54 PM
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Antonio-onion-yo-yo - Just about to have tea but saw you in comments
after I just posted a new blog and wanted to read your sonnet before you went to sleep. You had already warned me you were going to do this! Ha, ha, ha! So I knew what you were talking about. A masterful double-entendre, indeed! Yes, we did do the same thing today! This was really good, Tony. So very well done. Made me smile and I needed one this evening. Thank you so much! Off for tea now! No peas, though..........
posted by
FoliageGold
on July 25, 2007 at 4:09 PM
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Hi Enigmaticus - yes, same here - and bread!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 25, 2007 at 3:59 PM
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Hi Spencer - many thanks. Yes - or put them in the fridge first to cool!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 25, 2007 at 3:58 PM
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Thanks OTA - in that case I'll continue not cutting them!!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 25, 2007 at 3:57 PM
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Hi Jacenta - many thanks!!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 25, 2007 at 3:56 PM
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Hi Durbinio - many thanks, sir. No island is an island!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 25, 2007 at 3:56 PM
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Thanks Chris - glad you were drawn in!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 25, 2007 at 3:53 PM
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Antonio
Never cut onions before - although I have cut cheese. LOL!
posted by
Enigmatic68
on July 25, 2007 at 3:12 PM
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That got me. Cool sonnet. Cut onions under running water - no more tears!
posted by
SpencerStreetStation
on July 25, 2007 at 1:54 PM
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Tony, well done
I have cut onions.. they always make me cry
~Peace,OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on July 25, 2007 at 1:12 PM
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Antonionioni
posted by
jacentaOld
on July 25, 2007 at 1:02 PM
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wicked Tony and so powerful, effective and teasing...good going. Cheers
and don't l;et the flood waters amke u cry--just pray and use patience. The army seems to have things organized. Shalom
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 25, 2007 at 12:44 PM
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That is excellent Tony! Talk about 'double edged'-I wondered what more was
coming! Great.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 25, 2007 at 12:21 PM
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Hi Manda Lee -
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 25, 2007 at 12:11 PM
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posted by
Amanda__
on July 25, 2007 at 11:00 AM
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