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Re: I was wondering . . . . .
Yeah it happened a little over three years ago. I wrote this just now to find some closure and I feel like I did that. This poem is something of a sequel to a song that I wrote for the band I used to be in (the song was written about 9 months before the tragic event). I also wrote another poem about this girl right after I wrote this one. I might post it soon.

 

I'm sorry for your loss. It must have been really difficult to deal with.


posted by Asphyxiated on July 24, 2007 at 6:35 PM | link to this | reply

I was wondering . . . . .
Did this really happen?  the emotions are so vivid in this poem.  i love how it flowed together.  it was really beautiful and tragic.  it spoke to me.  my brother comitted suicide in december and this poem reminded me of him.  i thank you for writing exactly how i feel.  :-D  have a nice day

posted by serenity420 on July 23, 2007 at 9:05 PM | link to this | reply