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Although I'm not up much on sonnets as such........
I found this to be excellent reading - love the ending
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mariaki
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July 19, 2007
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Really well done Durbin! A disturbing beginning and a perfect end!(Hope
I got it right) Shalom from Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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July 17, 2007
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D-
Always grateful, always thankful, even when loved ones grow impatient; love by example, you must continue to live by your heart guided by your head.
LCM
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LadyCeeMarie
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July 17, 2007
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Durbin....Excellant choice....
always a a guiding light in your words and a calm to all who read, thank you. Shalom
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Irish3
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July 17, 2007
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great
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star4sky5
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July 16, 2007
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Good poem !
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afzal50
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July 16, 2007
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Excellent...I liked this
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dark_mistress
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July 16, 2007
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