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Ironic
this is very striking and well written.
posted by
mneme
on July 17, 2007 at 7:57 AM
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Unfortunately
getting stuck in our pasts is what prevents us from getting on with our future.... excellent piece
posted by
mariaki
on July 9, 2007 at 4:33 AM
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It is sad but I want to wtite for you that our past is our roots
The our present is the tree OUR future is the Fruits to redeem
YOUR WORDS ARE VERY HONEST FULL WITH PASSION...
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.the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on July 7, 2007 at 11:05 AM
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So very true and deep, my friend!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 7, 2007 at 9:09 AM
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getting stuck in the past is so very human..
wonderful writing. ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on July 7, 2007 at 9:04 AM
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WEll said ! Poignant and passionate poem !
posted by
afzal50
on July 7, 2007 at 7:32 AM
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