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Re: Be Strong

La_Paloma, Thanks for commenting on A Wreck.  I think in a latter version he will win her back.

Thanks again!

Damon

posted by Damond on July 5, 2007 at 11:10 PM | link to this | reply

Be Strong

Damond

I hope that the man will be stronger ever after. It's not worth to sacrifice for such woman.

He deserves someone better.

Cheers

posted by La_Paloma on July 5, 2007 at 9:13 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Damon, nice poem....really well expressed

Thanks for commenting Irish; I suspect that he will fight for her later after resting and coming to his senses.

Thanks again!

Damon

posted by Damond on July 5, 2007 at 7:02 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Good poem

Mariaki, it was around 2:00 in the morning when I wrote this and I was tired.  Maybe later I will have him win her back.

Thanks for commenting on A Wreck.

Damon

posted by Damond on July 5, 2007 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply

Re: touching

circuit, thanks for commenting on A Wreck.

Damon

posted by Damond on July 5, 2007 at 6:56 AM | link to this | reply

touching

posted by circuit on July 5, 2007 at 5:25 AM | link to this | reply

Good poem

but where's the guy's spirit?? Have him win her back......

posted by mariaki on July 5, 2007 at 4:34 AM | link to this | reply

Damon, nice poem....really well expressed

hopefully the guy will fight for her....and not give her up....have a great day

posted by Irish3 on July 4, 2007 at 9:04 PM | link to this | reply