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posted by
IronicParadox
on July 4, 2007 at 9:24 AM
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Pure excellence
read it twice and both times made me shudder.........
posted by
mariaki
on July 4, 2007 at 3:59 AM
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Hi IP - a very true and moving poem!
It is quite similar to some of Najwa's poems in the style - but not copied at all - both you and her are great!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 3, 2007 at 11:43 AM
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Your Poem is a human Feelings and thoughts In every time I had read it I read it again
It is full with sadness and pains But your Soul worshepped
The Mighty God to forgive and save<<<<<<<<If Life's Door closed God will open his Holy window for the new,,,,,,,,,,,,,the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on July 3, 2007 at 11:07 AM
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Powerful and moving...not cowardly, quite the opposite
posted by
Katray2
on July 3, 2007 at 10:44 AM
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An excellent piece of writing! No-you are by NO MEANS-a coward!
To add to what you have said-each of us is UNIQUE-we have to teach ourselves-but with a little guidance from others.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 3, 2007 at 9:43 AM
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WEll expressed !Nice poem!
posted by
afzal50
on July 3, 2007 at 9:18 AM
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