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Many thanks, Rae!! I think we try to imagine it and create it.

It must be a natural impulse to reorder the world.

posted by Antonionioni on July 3, 2007 at 12:40 PM | link to this | reply

I think we catch glimpses of perfection; fleeting though they may be

perhaps enough to fuel us onwards toward greater skies.
Well written and thought inducing sonnet, Tony.

posted by PoetRaye on July 3, 2007 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Troosha - thanks. I tried again with the same theme tonight!

posted by Antonionioni on July 2, 2007 at 12:28 PM | link to this | reply

Tony

I thought this was quite clever.  I like the image of the plain white sheet of paper unflawed until we muck with it. 

posted by Troosha on July 2, 2007 at 11:40 AM | link to this | reply

To be honest, Straightforward, I didn't really do justice to the idea.

I might have another go at it now!

posted by Antonionioni on July 2, 2007 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

I'd prefer a black page to an unwritten virgin white page; the latter is

certainly not my version of perfection.

posted by Straightforward on July 2, 2007 at 10:35 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Bhaskar, Dark Mistress and Mariaki - very much indeed!!

Nice to see you!

posted by Antonionioni on July 2, 2007 at 10:12 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you

and now for the applause...............

posted by mariaki on July 2, 2007 at 5:42 AM | link to this | reply

Sweet dreams....

posted by dark_mistress on July 2, 2007 at 5:32 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Tony, great to be back again, and congrats on your triple century.

The biggest imperfection of perfection is that it is lifeless. Somehow there is a beauty in imperfection. Don't you agree? In my yesterday's post, I have attempted to answer some very relevant points you made on the transmigration of the soul.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on July 2, 2007 at 5:09 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Notapoet - you've got a hell of a lot of catching up to do!!!!!

posted by Antonionioni on July 2, 2007 at 1:29 AM | link to this | reply

Hi folks - thanks for reading.

I confess to being a bit tired last night, so I rushed it. It started off nicely with the blank page idea, but then because I was having a couple of beers before bed time, I lazily drifted into talking about that instead of something more interesting - sorry!

posted by Antonionioni on July 2, 2007 at 1:28 AM | link to this | reply

Congrats on #300.

It's going to take me a while to catch up on all the ones I've missed.  I read a few back tonight, but like you I'm approaching the time for some sleep.  You'll have to fill me in on the nickname change sometime when we're both awake and lucid.

posted by notapoet on July 1, 2007 at 10:50 PM | link to this | reply

Anton

Good one and have a good carefree mind sleep pal............................

posted by WileyJohn on July 1, 2007 at 8:47 PM | link to this | reply

A very good poem,

I loved that the page is blank and we merely stain it with ink, invisioned thought, and I loved it. Wouldn't it be perfect if we didn't have to write thoughts, they were just known?

posted by Irish3 on July 1, 2007 at 6:05 PM | link to this | reply

Antonio

Good one, as usual!

posted by Enigmatic68 on July 1, 2007 at 5:04 PM | link to this | reply

very beautiful and excellent poem antonio

posted by drohan254 on July 1, 2007 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply