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Many thanks, Rae!! I think we try to imagine it and create it.
It must be a natural impulse to reorder the world.
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 3, 2007 at 12:40 PM
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I think we catch glimpses of perfection; fleeting though they may be
perhaps enough to fuel us onwards toward greater skies.
Well written and thought inducing sonnet, Tony.
posted by
Katray2
on July 3, 2007 at 10:41 AM
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Hi Troosha - thanks. I tried again with the same theme tonight!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 2, 2007 at 12:28 PM
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Tony
I thought this was quite clever. I like the image of the plain white sheet of paper unflawed until we muck with it.
posted by
Troosha
on July 2, 2007 at 11:40 AM
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To be honest, Straightforward, I didn't really do justice to the idea.
I might have another go at it now!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 2, 2007 at 10:42 AM
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I'd prefer a black page to an unwritten virgin white page; the latter is
certainly not my version of perfection.
posted by
Straightforward
on July 2, 2007 at 10:35 AM
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Thanks Bhaskar, Dark Mistress and Mariaki - very much indeed!!
Nice to see you!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 2, 2007 at 10:12 AM
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Thank you
and now for the applause...............
posted by
mariaki
on July 2, 2007 at 5:42 AM
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Sweet dreams....
posted by
dark_mistress
on July 2, 2007 at 5:32 AM
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Hi Tony, great to be back again, and congrats on your triple century.
The biggest imperfection of perfection is that it is lifeless. Somehow there is a beauty in imperfection. Don't you agree? In my yesterday's post, I have attempted to answer some very relevant points you made on the transmigration of the soul.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 2, 2007 at 5:09 AM
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Hi Notapoet - you've got a hell of a lot of catching up to do!!!!!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 2, 2007 at 1:29 AM
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Hi folks - thanks for reading.
I confess to being a bit tired last night, so I rushed it. It started off nicely with the blank page idea, but then because I was having a couple of beers before bed time, I lazily drifted into talking about that instead of something more interesting - sorry!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 2, 2007 at 1:28 AM
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Congrats on #300.
It's going to take me a while to catch up on all the ones I've missed. I read a few back tonight, but like you I'm approaching the time for some sleep. You'll have to fill me in on the nickname change sometime when we're both awake and lucid.
posted by
notapoet
on July 1, 2007 at 10:50 PM
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Anton
Good one and have a good carefree mind sleep pal............................
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 1, 2007 at 8:47 PM
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A very good poem,
I loved that the page is blank and we merely stain it with ink, invisioned thought, and I loved it. Wouldn't it be perfect if we didn't have to write thoughts, they were just known?
posted by
Irish3
on July 1, 2007 at 6:05 PM
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Antonio
Good one, as usual!
posted by
Enigmatic68
on July 1, 2007 at 5:04 PM
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very beautiful and excellent poem antonio
posted by
drohan254
on July 1, 2007 at 4:05 PM
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