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Straightforward
Something like that.
posted by
IronicParadox
on June 17, 2007 at 7:30 AM
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Seeking convergence?
posted by
Straightforward
on June 17, 2007 at 5:37 AM
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Thank you for your insight dear stranger!
posted by
IronicParadox
on June 17, 2007 at 3:33 AM
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I know you know that the eyes are the Mirror of our soul
But you are rite some time the frame is so beautiful and look very happy,,,
,,,,but how you know the love you feel ..
......it is very simple uncover her smile and enter her soul to be unsealed
every word you wrote in this poem calling for deep Passion
it is very beautiful and very honest too
......the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on June 16, 2007 at 9:59 AM
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no sense can suit everyone we are all individuals, but it was a nice poem
posted by
Lanetay
on June 16, 2007 at 8:53 AM
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Ironic - Thank you for elaborating.
I understand what you're saying and I think you're right. Although, I suspect it's somewhat rare to connect so powerfully in this way. Good work.
Wishing you a lovely day, as well.
posted by
FoliageGold
on June 16, 2007 at 7:29 AM
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Afzal,Thank you!
posted by
IronicParadox
on June 16, 2007 at 7:27 AM
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Good question FoliageGold.
I think it is possible,if you know someone real good and your thoughts are alike,there's a good chance that your experiences become alike also,if you spent a lot of time together and resonate very good.But one can't always be certain.That's what this poem is about.It questions if there are souls alike out there.I believe so,but I also believe it doesn't happen with every person you come to meet.I hope this clarifies your question.I always write my poems with the assumption they make sense.But everyone can have a different opinion about that.Anyway thanks for your question and have a nice day!
posted by
IronicParadox
on June 16, 2007 at 7:27 AM
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WEll expressed ! Good poem.
posted by
afzal50
on June 16, 2007 at 7:12 AM
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Ironic
Gee, I don't know. Is it even possible?
posted by
FoliageGold
on June 16, 2007 at 7:08 AM
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