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This was my favorite out of everything I read.  Short and right on target.  Subtle and dark.  Great work!

posted by Ryan_Morrow on September 13, 2009 at 8:43 PM | link to this | reply

saul relative
Thanks so much, saul... nice to see you. :)

posted by Temple on July 4, 2007 at 1:26 AM | link to this | reply

Holy Grail
Thanks HG.... yeah... it's sad.  What can I say...

posted by Temple on July 4, 2007 at 1:25 AM | link to this | reply

teddy
Ah, you've gone down to one name like "Prince" or "Madonna" ... or maybe "Picasso" is a better, more artistic example? :) Sorry to be gone so long, life does get in the way. I'm so happy to see you here, and glad you liked it.  I hope all is well with you... I desperately need to catch up. xo

posted by Temple on July 4, 2007 at 12:43 AM | link to this | reply

drohan254
Nice to "meet" you... thanks so much for reading and leaving a footprint.  I seem to do best in the tortured places.  A blessing... a curse? ... of the artist perhaps?  I'm glad that you liked it though ... there will be happier ones to come. (fingers crossed) ;)

posted by Temple on July 4, 2007 at 12:41 AM | link to this | reply

afzal
Thank you! I was rather happy with the flow of this one myself.  :)

posted by Temple on July 4, 2007 at 12:39 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent, Temple.

posted by saul_relative on June 30, 2007 at 9:29 PM | link to this | reply

Well I agree with Teddy but it makes me sad.

posted by Holy_Grail on June 13, 2007 at 5:53 PM | link to this | reply

Finally a chance to read you again ...still wonderful work, my friend!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on June 13, 2007 at 4:11 AM | link to this | reply

sad and beautifully written temple

posted by drohan254 on June 13, 2007 at 1:39 AM | link to this | reply

WEll expressed ! Good poem.

posted by afzal50 on June 13, 2007 at 12:07 AM | link to this | reply