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You're painting the under-belly through here very well. I'd stay away from the cliche at the beginning though. Up to you.
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FoliageGold
on June 14, 2007 at 5:30 PM
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posted by
A-and-B
on June 13, 2007 at 3:48 AM
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I especially like the 'he'd wipe me like a windshield. How long have you been writing. This seems to flow out of your head not pour out.
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Justi
on June 11, 2007 at 5:21 PM
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