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Re: FoliageGold--re, "hair pie." Old slang for the whatcha .
posted by
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on June 15, 2007 at 4:46 AM
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Re: bandanafish--hair pie. that is a little hard to swallow.
posted by
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on June 15, 2007 at 4:42 AM
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Re: FoliageGold--visual format, For some reason I am having trouble posting
in my regular poetry and prose formats...sorry. As for the writing, I am writing this describing the actions of a man who is a would be writer and this prose is first person. It can be confusing when I switch persons, especially, not having an introduction, etc. I am trying to make the changes as seamless as possible. My basic style follows my first book, The Cure of Sexual Obsession, which is turn followed the style of Saint Augustine's Confessions...lol. Thanks for your patience and enlightening comments.
posted by
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on June 15, 2007 at 4:38 AM
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Mr. Scriber.
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Hair Pie"!? Oh, gosh.
posted by
bandanafish
on June 14, 2007 at 8:27 PM
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Why are you changing visual formats? First there's straight prose, last post was like a prose poem and this one had lines in it as though it were a news script? I'm lost with that. What's a 'hair pie'?
posted by
FoliageGold
on June 14, 2007 at 5:26 PM
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Re: Re: Manda--I should have said anything is better than nothing, which is
what I usually get. thanks.
posted by
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on June 11, 2007 at 3:11 PM
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Re: ME--thanks for the flower although I must admit I don't really like
those shortcuts for words...
posted by
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on June 11, 2007 at 2:23 PM
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Amanda__
on June 11, 2007 at 1:23 PM
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