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Re: FoliageGold--re, "hair pie." Old slang for the whatcha .

posted by scriber on June 15, 2007 at 4:46 AM | link to this | reply

Re: bandanafish--hair pie. that is a little hard to swallow.

posted by scriber on June 15, 2007 at 4:42 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FoliageGold--visual format, For some reason I am having trouble posting

in my regular poetry and prose formats...sorry.  As for the writing, I am writing this describing the actions of a man who is a would be writer and this prose is first person. It can be confusing when I switch persons, especially, not having an introduction, etc.  I am trying to make the changes as seamless as possible.  My basic style follows my first book, The Cure of Sexual Obsession, which is turn followed the style of Saint Augustine's Confessions...lol.  Thanks for your patience and enlightening comments. 

posted by scriber on June 15, 2007 at 4:38 AM | link to this | reply

Mr. Scriber.

"Hair Pie"!? Oh, gosh.

posted by bandanafish on June 14, 2007 at 8:27 PM | link to this | reply

scriber

Why are you changing visual formats?  First there's straight prose, last post was like a prose poem and this one had lines in it as though it were a news script?  I'm lost with that.  What's a 'hair pie'?

posted by FoliageGold on June 14, 2007 at 5:26 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Manda--I should have said anything is better than nothing, which is

what I usually get. thanks. 

posted by scriber on June 11, 2007 at 3:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: ME--thanks for the flower although I must admit I don't really like

those shortcuts for words...

posted by scriber on June 11, 2007 at 2:23 PM | link to this | reply

posted by MandaLee on June 11, 2007 at 1:23 PM | link to this | reply