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Wonderful!
posted by
FoliageGold
on June 12, 2007 at 5:28 PM
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Good job with your lines. I felt they were crisp, which is refreshing. A lot of times verses can be really flowing and melancholy but this wasn't at all!
posted by
rainydayinmay
on June 12, 2007 at 6:00 AM
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Nice verses!
posted by
Munih
on June 12, 2007 at 3:42 AM
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Many good lines in there - thoughts brought to life very well!
posted by
Antonionioni
on June 11, 2007 at 11:34 AM
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Nice poem! WEll expressed .
posted by
afzal50
on June 11, 2007 at 9:53 AM
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