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Thanks Drohan, I appreciate your encouragement very much
 It's not just these sonnets I'm on about - it's other stuff I've done or may do. These sonnets will probably have to be self-published or not at all - they're too weird and unlikely for people to take a commercial gamble on, I expect!

posted by Antonionioni on June 2, 2007 at 11:27 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Enigtastico!

posted by Antonionioni on June 2, 2007 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Bhaskar - no, the preparation in the kitchen is really the hard work
aspect not of the initial creation, which is work but has a fun element too, is a kind of play, like socialising or listening to music, but the real hard work, which is the marketing. That's why I refer to it as a 'foul' mix, and later on use the word 'distasteful' because this brought the effort to get published back to the idea of slaving away in the kitchen while others are relaxing somewhere and enjoying themselves. The analogy doesn't work as well for those who love cooking, but hopefully the structure of the poem provides the clues, albeit hard to find. I'm saying, really, I wish I had an agent to do all the approaching of publishers on my behalf, LoL!

posted by Antonionioni on June 2, 2007 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Teddy - I wrote it to myself, if truth be told, not as a 'lesson'
or sermon - I've done this a few times now. just trying to gee myself up a bit. It doesn't really work, to be honest!

posted by Antonionioni on June 2, 2007 at 11:19 AM | link to this | reply

Yes, Mary, there will be no problem in eating my peas, at least!

posted by Antonionioni on June 2, 2007 at 11:17 AM | link to this | reply

TONYZONIT
BEAUTIFUL AND FULL OF POWER ,DON'T LEAVE YOUR KITCHEN AND BE YOUR SELF ALWAYS ,TO BE UNIQUE YOU PLEASE YOUR SOUL AND MIND NOT OTHERS AND ONE DAY ONE PUBLISHER SAME AS YOU WILL TELL YOU OO WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN.

posted by drohan254 on June 2, 2007 at 10:29 AM | link to this | reply

Tony

posted by Enigmatic68 on June 2, 2007 at 8:58 AM | link to this | reply

do the ....Correction

posted by Bhaskar.ing on June 2, 2007 at 8:57 AM | link to this | reply

Hello Tony
Just as in the kitchen food that is prepared, we want it to be delicious, so also does the publishers desire the best of a writer, prepared in the kitchen of his writing table, and naturally in this he cannot be faulted. Is that what it means, Tony? Do not know whether my interpretation is correct.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on June 2, 2007 at 8:57 AM | link to this | reply

Much Truth in this, Tony...quite something to heed beyond the reading...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on June 2, 2007 at 8:38 AM | link to this | reply

Tony
Ah, yes, the recipe for success!  Never give in or give up.  And DO eat your peas!  lol 

posted by FoliageGold on June 2, 2007 at 8:26 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Chris - you're right - the opening line is just a general remark, really
 - then i got into the food theme, which still wa spretty general, then the publishing bit I thought would be relevant to most of the unpublished readers here or even those who have been published, because they must have had to do a fair bit of work to get published, but you're right it could be about anything! Thanks for reading! It's still sunny...

posted by Antonionioni on June 2, 2007 at 7:36 AM | link to this | reply

The poem is great Tony! It does not cover ONLY publishers-does it?
It's also for whatever else we are searching for  in life! Chris.

posted by Scramble on June 2, 2007 at 6:52 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Afzal - thanks mister.

posted by Antonionioni on June 2, 2007 at 6:41 AM | link to this | reply

I agree with you .

posted by afzal50 on June 2, 2007 at 5:48 AM | link to this | reply