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posted by lustorlove on May 25, 2007 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

Passionate and Poignant .

posted by afzal50 on May 24, 2007 at 5:08 PM | link to this | reply

Dro54--right, after the storm a calm and reasoned approach to his problem.

posted by scriber on May 24, 2007 at 2:42 PM | link to this | reply

SCRIBER WARM AND CALM POEM ,BEAUTIFUL

posted by drohan254 on May 24, 2007 at 2:31 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Offy--glad you liked this brief battle between the desires and common

sense. 

posted by scriber on May 24, 2007 at 2:05 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Scriber--I really like this. Chris.--Thanks much Chris.

posted by scriber on May 24, 2007 at 2:04 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Scriber--thanks TAPS, appreciate your comment as always...

posted by scriber on May 24, 2007 at 2:03 PM | link to this | reply

scriber

This is excellent!! I really enjoyed it..

posted by Offy on May 24, 2007 at 1:34 PM | link to this | reply

Scriber--I really like this. Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 24, 2007 at 1:03 PM | link to this | reply

Scriber

As always, you are so brilliant in making us see exactly what you are describing.

posted by TAPS. on May 24, 2007 at 11:53 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hi Scriber...I like this one too.....thanks, but like with hos, check

em out. No one is consistently out of the park.  Give me a one of three, and I'll be happy.  Actually some poets sort of turn my stomach, like who de girl here.  parlie vo do. 

posted by scriber on May 24, 2007 at 11:26 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Fesh meat to a ho.....hahasha--bet u do. go with the corn row ho.

posted by scriber on May 24, 2007 at 11:21 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Scriber...I like this one too.....you are going to make me like

poetry, aren't you? LOL  

posted by RckyMtnActivist on May 24, 2007 at 11:03 AM | link to this | reply

Fesh meat to a ho.....

We talkin' nappy-headed ho or non-nap?  I have personal preferences.

posted by mark2556 on May 24, 2007 at 10:59 AM | link to this | reply