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Very well written-if this comes from your experiences and Heart--
then life is/has been-horrendous for you! God bless-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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May 15, 2007
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Nice poem. WEll expressed .
posted by
afzal50
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May 15, 2007
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I really liked the undending nightmare lines in the last stanza. That was a really effective switch you used there.
One minor thing: In the last line, it should be "its" instead of "it's".
posted by
tyler1984
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May 14, 2007
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