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Awsome write and true but still unsure deep insight rise humans brows!
posted by
Mystereo
on January 17, 2009 at 8:40 PM
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maybe maybe not...
posted by
scriber
on May 14, 2007 at 6:19 PM
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i agree
yes i agree with this poem, i believe it is one of the law of the universe
posted by
Sheilan
on May 14, 2007 at 12:01 PM
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right on the mark!!!!
great work!!!
posted by
riri0322
on May 14, 2007 at 10:58 AM
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Great little piece, Pat - you make a good point, too!
posted by
Antonionioni
on May 14, 2007 at 12:30 AM
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nice write
posted by
contagion_publishing
on May 13, 2007 at 9:19 PM
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VEry true .
posted by
afzal50
on May 13, 2007 at 6:08 PM
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VEry true .
posted by
afzal50
on May 13, 2007 at 6:08 PM
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I want to agree... I know you're right; but too slow Pat and the waters may wash this away. Slow spirited steps are one, stagnant footfalls are another...
posted by
dark_mistress
on May 13, 2007 at 4:46 PM
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