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posted by
Decshak_
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May 14, 2007
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Beautiful Scriber...I miss my mom too!
posted by
RckyMtnActivist
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May 14, 2007
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Forceful but somehow delicate too. Very nicely done.
Be well,
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
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May 13, 2007
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Always a better tomorrow...
Your poem was beautifully written. I sense a lot of love behind your words....namaste, BlueEagle...x
posted by
BlueEagle
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May 13, 2007
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beautiful!
posted by
MandaLee
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May 13, 2007
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Scriber - i liked this line a lot...
I feel her most on lonely nights
when
tears betray my sorrow.
posted by
littlemspickles
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May 13, 2007
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Re: proc---very nice of you. thanks.
posted by
scriber
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May 12, 2007
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Re: Very nicely written--thanks Chris...
posted by
scriber
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May 12, 2007
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Re: scriber--thanks FoliageGold,
posted by
scriber
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May 12, 2007
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This made me cry.......so sad but real.
posted by
FoliageGold
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May 12, 2007
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Very nicely written-or-re-written.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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May 12, 2007
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As a man you may not appreciate my comment but this is so sweet.
posted by
proc
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May 12, 2007
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WEll said .
posted by
afzal50
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May 12, 2007
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Re: thanks NAJWA--a true friend;
posted by
scriber
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May 12, 2007
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Scribes...
And a nice re-write it is.
posted by
Transcendental_Child
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May 12, 2007
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o my friend tonight we are on the same lane in the momemories of love and pain there are pure souls swimming on our blue sky without rain connecting our pens in the womder Land I love your words it is sad but pure honest feeling and embracing the wind at my dark window,,,,,,,,,,,there is misty Dawn write now smile with me.....
........the stranger
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NAJWA
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May 12, 2007
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