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Ypunday
Your sonnet ends on a nice positive note, and I think the poem seems to fit the title.

posted by mneme on May 16, 2007 at 6:00 AM | link to this | reply

Your comments & visits are appreciated--Blogiteers.The mystic symbol is
supposed to be a source of inspiration --but that was a result of a SEARCH on internet, not for RELIGION, LOL. I may research this symbol more, but it is not part of any modern religion as far as I can tell. shalomfromneil

posted by salem8 on May 10, 2007 at 5:19 AM | link to this | reply

What a myriad of images. Soul-satisfying.

posted by proc on May 9, 2007 at 1:04 PM | link to this | reply

Neil-Hi.I am just 'catching up' on reading you-(been away for w/e.)
I have read throug ALL-in wonder and amazement!! Beautifull words to read and beautifull pics. to see! This is the very first time I have seen Bonsai's in FLOWER! How sad is that? They are stunning-as is your posts.shalomfromchris.ps.Many thanks for reading my posts-I read the 'breakdown'.Thanks.

posted by Scramble on May 9, 2007 at 12:49 PM | link to this | reply

Bhaskar.ing, I think you posted this in the wrong blog LOL But thank you!!

posted by Ariala on May 9, 2007 at 9:00 AM | link to this | reply

Ariala, Narcissistic is the word for those who are too much in love with
themselves. They are the ones who pride in looking from somebody else's eyes, and are called timid, another meaning of the word 'apprehensive, easily frightened'. Good writing even when you cannot type, you're around always of course, I mean your presence is. Understand, you Blogit Queen?  

posted by Bhaskar.ing on May 9, 2007 at 8:39 AM | link to this | reply

YOu are a great poet indeed .

posted by afzal50 on May 9, 2007 at 8:18 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Neil - great picture - a mystic wheel. I'm mystified by it.
What does it do? I'll have another look. Lovely sonnet - ranging widely in theme, as often happens in sonnets. Particularly good end, i thought.

posted by Antonionioni on May 9, 2007 at 8:06 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely mystic wheel that, YPunday. ShalomAumNamahShivayefromBhas

posted by Bhaskar.ing on May 9, 2007 at 8:02 AM | link to this | reply

Wow Neil, what a golden crown to the equally lovely sonnet!! B R A V O

posted by Bhaskar.ing on May 9, 2007 at 8:01 AM | link to this | reply

Sunny Inspiration! thanks and amen

http://www.newmoon.uk.com/supplies/bluemysticwheelweb.jpg

posted by salem8 on May 9, 2007 at 7:53 AM | link to this | reply

Good morning neil. I loved this poem. It is so well written.

posted by MandaLee on May 9, 2007 at 7:53 AM | link to this | reply

Very well said

posted by Sunnybeach7 on May 9, 2007 at 7:34 AM | link to this | reply

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