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I read the revised version - it's good, well done!
It certainly brings her character out.

posted by Antonionioni on May 8, 2007 at 11:33 AM | link to this | reply

Good you revised it .

posted by afzal50 on May 7, 2007 at 10:28 PM | link to this | reply