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Good explanation, Neil - shame I missed this first time round.

posted by Antonionioni on May 4, 2007 at 11:12 AM | link to this | reply

YP

Thanks, darlin', for straightening me out on that. I will sleep better (or I'd better sleep, sometime!)

LadyCeeMarie

posted by LadyCeeMarie on May 4, 2007 at 12:38 AM | link to this | reply

LadyC.My last lines,related to miracle of healthy birth&growth, a la' Tony:

sometimes the cells go awry; they do not complete making some tissues, organs, and hence we have withered arms (Wilhem I of Germany, reportedly causing WW1 because  of it). But also disease of any kind, especially cancers, do show cells malfunctioning, or greedy for sugar, grows faster than regular cells and like weeds overrun the normal garden of human bodies. The worst example would be STD cells...OOOOOOOOh we don;t want that kind of exchange or bodily fluids containing such naughty/bad? cells. shalom&health2you.Neil

posted by salem8 on May 3, 2007 at 2:50 PM | link to this | reply

Wow--a reign of flowers; a rain of flowers. Thank U blogorganisms

shalom--metta--gasshho--Jehovah Jayrah--peace--Paz--Pax.

posted by salem8 on May 3, 2007 at 2:47 PM | link to this | reply

Enjoy

posted by Kat02 on May 3, 2007 at 10:40 AM | link to this | reply

Neil here are a few Tulips for you

posted by Kat02 on May 3, 2007 at 10:39 AM | link to this | reply

Deceive, conceive, coveys it all, YPuinday. E x C E L L E N T

posted by Bhaskar.ing on May 3, 2007 at 10:36 AM | link to this | reply

YP-

I forgot to leave you a gift!

http://s109.photobucket.com/albums/n62/ceemarie53/th_fair-as-moon.jpg

I would call her a Wisteria Wonder.

Peace and Blessings to you this day!

LadyCeeMarie

posted by LadyCeeMarie on May 3, 2007 at 10:27 AM | link to this | reply

Outstanding! Glad the pic inspired a very erotic sonnet. Thank you, Tony, for inspiring Neil!!

Re: the last line:
Gates of heaven encased in human form;
Gates of hell when cells migrate and transform!

This is a very dark line; I think it suggests a child conceived out of lust/one night stand type of encounter, is evil??  Or is the act evil? Or neither. What was your meaning here? Help me understand it.

Peace
LadyCeeMarie

posted by LadyCeeMarie on May 3, 2007 at 10:22 AM | link to this | reply

Very well written Neil.shalomfromchris.

posted by Scramble on May 3, 2007 at 9:44 AM | link to this | reply

YPunday,

i agree.

posted by richinstore on May 3, 2007 at 6:43 AM | link to this | reply

Ahhh Kato--I copied tulips from yr BLOG. But couldn't from yr email sent me

Here's one I have been enjoying and sharing today--national day of Prayer! Amen

http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Picture.aspx/Kat02/Tulips%20Forever

posted by salem8 on May 3, 2007 at 6:34 AM | link to this | reply