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Thank you for your kind words, .
And scriber, the Mayflower was the first ship to arrive at Plymouth Rock carrying the survivors of that original pilgrim voyage to North America.
posted by
Jenasis
on May 4, 2007 at 4:59 PM
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Love the imagery
I love poems in general and I like what you have done with this. Very interesting word play that I'm not really sure I get completely like ships of steal that change the entire way the poem might be interpreted. A fresh poem. Thanks
posted by
anarchistbanjo
on May 4, 2007 at 2:31 PM
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A well thought out poem, but not sure at all times where the ship is
headed...
posted by
scriber
on May 2, 2007 at 11:01 AM
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Again, I appreciate your reading, afzal.
posted by
Jenasis
on May 2, 2007 at 10:51 AM
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Excellent thought and message expressed here in this poem.
posted by
afzal50
on May 2, 2007 at 10:11 AM
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