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Afzal, Proc, Rich, Chris and Lady Cee.Yr points are well taken.Thanx&ShaloM

Here i have turned again toward the Rainbow--God's Promises! Peace to all; Viva Blogit & Blogiteers. NEIL

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posted by salem8 on May 2, 2007 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

Re: So sorry you were made so very angry Neil! However-you seem to have

I meant to add that I can FEEL it in your writing which you have clearly defined in a very well written manner! Great.

posted by Scramble on May 2, 2007 at 8:21 AM | link to this | reply

So sorry you were made so very angry Neil! However-you seem to have

handled it very well!shalomfromchris.

posted by Scramble on May 2, 2007 at 8:20 AM | link to this | reply

YPunday

stay cool, brother.

posted by richinstore on May 2, 2007 at 2:36 AM | link to this | reply

we all lose it sometime. Be strong. even Jesus lost it in the temple.

posted by proc on May 1, 2007 at 11:12 PM | link to this | reply

YP-First time I've ever seen you with a temper!

That's what we're here for; so you can vent.  Feast your eyes: I am going to write about roses tonight (not this one, exactly).

 

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LadyCeeMarie

posted by LadyCeeMarie on May 1, 2007 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

Good poem . WEll written.

posted by afzal50 on May 1, 2007 at 8:08 PM | link to this | reply

Hey guys--u could always cool off with these after reading my ANGER SONNET!

shalomfromneil

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posted by salem8 on May 1, 2007 at 7:59 PM | link to this | reply