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Great stuff! Almost Kerouacian - if I may coin a term.
Be well,
-smartdog
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smartdog_670
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April 28, 2007
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so beautiful scriber
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drohan254
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April 28, 2007
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A nice poem,Scriber.
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Munih
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April 28, 2007
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Re: excellent.--thanks much MandaLee...
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scriber
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April 28, 2007
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Re: scriber--right TimmyT--Europe is the best place to train, but this
instance recalls a freight train, with one passenger car at the end of several freight cars as was the practice in the U.S.
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scriber
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April 28, 2007
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excellent.
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MandaLee
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April 28, 2007
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I have yet to ride on a train.....other than the little kiddie trains at places of amusement
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TIMMYTALES
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April 28, 2007
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Re: Mary--this is taken from a three-volume work on Jubere in New York,
Canada, and Detroit. This poem concerns his train ride from New York into Canada...thanks...
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April 28, 2007
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Re: That's so funny ... I was just on the train a little while ago.--maybe
by the early morning hours, if you were on the train that long, you would have gotten horney.
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scriber
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April 28, 2007
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Re: Catholic Fish???-A Catholic fish is one with
sharp teeth in this presentation, and in his mind...
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scriber
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April 28, 2007
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Hi Scriber
What is a Catholic fish?
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April 28, 2007
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Re: what does "fxxxing" mean? In plain term: fucking...maybe I should make
that a little clearer; write "fuxking"....
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April 28, 2007
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FoliageGold--thanks...He was often in his own little world...
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April 28, 2007
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That's so funny ... I was just on the train a little while ago.
I didn't find the experience "sensual" at all, though.
Oh, and what does "fxxxing" mean? Is that some sort of "Black Irish" term?
I guess more bad things have been done
in the name of progress than any other.
I myself have even been guilty of this.
When I was a teenager, I stole a car and
drove it out into the desert and set it on fire.
When the police showed up, I just shrugged and said,
"Hey, progress." Boy, did I have a lot to learn.
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Mademoiselle
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April 28, 2007
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Nice poem.
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afzal50
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April 28, 2007
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Beautiful! While reading, I had the image of a man sleeping with eyes moving as during a dream. Lovely! --Joy!Mary
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FoliageGold
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