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Thank you so much, Strat

posted by PoetRaye on April 25, 2007 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Mary!

posted by PoetRaye on April 25, 2007 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply

Catching up.

These are beautiful, Rae! You do wonderful work!

posted by strat on April 25, 2007 at 6:18 AM | link to this | reply

RaeS

Wow!  Read it three times and the final time v e r y slowly.  Really nice, Rae.  --Joy!Mary 

posted by FoliageGold on April 25, 2007 at 5:44 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you so much, dear Lady Justi!

 

posted by PoetRaye on April 24, 2007 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Afzal

posted by PoetRaye on April 24, 2007 at 8:57 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, dear Maggie!

posted by PoetRaye on April 24, 2007 at 8:57 PM | link to this | reply

RaeS

Lovely lady, this is a poem what is a poem. Oh it is so beautiful.

posted by Justi on April 24, 2007 at 7:58 PM | link to this | reply

It's a beautiful poem.

posted by afzal50 on April 24, 2007 at 6:29 PM | link to this | reply

Good job, dear lady,,,,,,,,,,,,

posted by MaggieMae on April 24, 2007 at 4:39 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Shelly, Thank you

posted by PoetRaye on April 24, 2007 at 3:37 PM | link to this | reply

Rae, very nice!

posted by shelly_b on April 24, 2007 at 3:30 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, I love that one too..deeply reaching and rocking

 

posted by PoetRaye on April 24, 2007 at 3:19 PM | link to this | reply

Nice one...Into The Mystic is my favorite...

posted by _teddypoet_ on April 24, 2007 at 3:13 PM | link to this | reply

wanna be....

your "brown eyed girl"..song played a few minutes ago.....:)  

posted by PoetRaye on April 24, 2007 at 3:07 PM | link to this | reply

Likewise, Dear Lady Raye

posted by _teddypoet_ on April 24, 2007 at 2:41 PM | link to this | reply

So nice to see you, Dear One

posted by PoetRaye on April 24, 2007 at 2:34 PM | link to this | reply

Most welcome, Raye.

posted by _teddypoet_ on April 24, 2007 at 2:31 PM | link to this | reply

Thank You, Ted!

   

posted by PoetRaye on April 24, 2007 at 2:30 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Mademoiselle

trippin' with eyes closed, lollll.

posted by PoetRaye on April 24, 2007 at 2:29 PM | link to this | reply

Well-written, Raye

posted by _teddypoet_ on April 24, 2007 at 2:02 PM | link to this | reply

Really good poem, and interesting metaphor.

Personally, I feel more like I'm stuck in a whirlpool, though ... because it seems like I keep going around in circles.

And also, I'm dizzy a lot.

Sometimes life seems like a dream,
especially when I look down and
realize that I'm naked.

posted by Mademoiselle on April 24, 2007 at 12:45 PM | link to this | reply