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Neil

Wisdome seems to find it's way to you everytime you pick up a pen, Once again you find just the right words  missing U

posted by Kat02 on April 19, 2007 at 6:32 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Tony the Sonnet Man. Glad your poems often make me go back into the

good memory bank; and vice versa is heartening. shalomfromneil

posted by salem8 on April 17, 2007 at 12:24 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Afzal and Mneme--great to see you visit again

Peacegreetingsneil

posted by salem8 on April 17, 2007 at 12:14 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Dear Chris

shalomfromneil

posted by salem8 on April 17, 2007 at 12:13 PM | link to this | reply

Neil-this is just lovely! I was going to say similar to Tony-about

remembering how we grew the seeds at school.I also believe that 'The Pen Is Mightier Than The Sword'! Problem is-teaching those who don't know! shalomfromchris.

posted by Scramble on April 17, 2007 at 6:57 AM | link to this | reply

Very good Ypunday

I don't always remember to check this blog, this is well said.

posted by mneme on April 16, 2007 at 6:09 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Neil - that picture takes me back to school, and watching beans

germinate in a jar of water. The poem itself is very wise, drawing on Elder Brookes' and others' wisdom, too. It is the cowards' way to use violence in most situations and, of course, if you are physically less strong or numerous than your oppressor, other methods should always be considered. But it is often difficult to change people's minds other than by force, that is the sad truth.

posted by Antonionioni on April 16, 2007 at 5:47 AM | link to this | reply

Ypuday,

YOu are great .

posted by afzal50 on April 15, 2007 at 10:21 PM | link to this | reply