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- Go to Loss and Gain --the cherry blossoms wafted away on winds of April
L_O_F_S--lofty readers, thank U: LadyCeeMarie, OTA, FoliageGold & Scramble
Your kind contributions begin my weekend rright. Enjoy your Sabbaths or days of rest, peace and prosperity as we prepare for another week ahead. shalomfromneil
posted by
salem8
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April 14, 2007
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YP-
I loved this one; your car the bride so clever! You are a romantic, Neil. Here in Kansas, we had them throw wheat for good luck. In fact our wheat had been grown by my father. Here we are 30 years ago, running through a hail of wheat....
LadyCeeMarie 
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
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April 13, 2007
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oh and here is more.. I am really liking these Ypunday!
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OTA.
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April 13, 2007
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You are so right-Neil-with each and every ending-there is a new begin!
My cherry blossom has not come out yet-seems late-so it won't be blown away just yet.Nice one Neil.Chris.
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Scramble
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April 13, 2007
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YPunday
Why these are lovely! The word, 'car 'made me laugh, but you're so right! Love that turtle. --Joy!Mary
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FoliageGold
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April 13, 2007
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Proc, Moonspirit, Tonyzonnet-I do enjoy the encouragement. Who doesn't. And
I know I improve each time I read others here on Blogit, and each time I write. I adore the haiku--though I have yet to write a real one, that will be accepted by the hajin.
Tony was instrumental in having me get over my diffidence with the sonnet form. I read his, and then go on experimenting with themes my mind latches on to. The best of blogit is to encourage writers get better in every way, every day. shalomfromneil. Blessings/Paz!
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salem8
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April 13, 2007
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Ah yes, I do enjoy the cherry blossom theme.
The picture is good, and also I think your second haiku is a different and original take on the theme.
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Antonionioni
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April 13, 2007
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YP, in my opinion, you become more and more and more talented. Perhaps it is merely the dullness of me that is being removed. As the cherry blossom itself, you open more joyously, flinging fragrance with abandon. MoonSpirit 
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chitravathi_moon
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April 12, 2007
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Nature gives us such beautiful examples of endings and beginnings.
Hard to tell what is the difference.Nice poem and pic.
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proc
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April 12, 2007
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will be great......
posted by
star4sky5
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April 12, 2007
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Thanks Star. Perhaps i shall deliver the same pic to you
shalomfromneil
posted by
salem8
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April 12, 2007
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wow, that's so awesome...
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star4sky5
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April 12, 2007
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http://static.userland.com/images/surprise/cherrypetals.gif
posted by
salem8
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April 12, 2007
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