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NAJWA
your heart bleeds into your poems.. you are so special!!

posted by Blue_feathers on April 11, 2007 at 1:50 AM | link to this | reply

Najwa - The more I read this poem, the more it grows on me...

and now it's part of me. Yes, I definitely like the old you.

Child

Without deception does your smile

cause your soul to sparkle,

Unspoilt innocence makes you still think,

feel, say and do like a child.

When your spirit had once fallen

your laughter showed it not broken,

Your strength is your belief in to-day

not to-morrow, nor some day.

posted by shadow-pen on April 11, 2007 at 1:33 AM | link to this | reply

Najwa
You write with so much love inside your self you are that butterfly that flutters around the hearts of others

posted by Kat02 on April 6, 2007 at 4:48 PM | link to this | reply

very good

posted by linter on April 5, 2007 at 11:20 PM | link to this | reply

Najwa--that childish laughter never grow old...

posted by scriber on April 5, 2007 at 5:18 PM | link to this | reply