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Lovely readers
There is no satisfying denoument for this piece....no "to be continued" where we receive comfort and answers and resolution from the author. That I will leave to the reader. Good luck!
posted by
give_a_rip
on April 6, 2007 at 6:42 PM
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give_a_rip
Excellent piece of writing and a fantastic story. Will come back for a second read.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 6, 2007 at 10:53 AM
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If this is a true story, I am hoping for a ...to be continued?
If this is fiction (or not), excellent imagery and descriptive writing. A very interesting and well written post. Thank you. I was one hiding in church for many years but now go boldly before the Lord. I could very much relate to this girl hiding. She's there waiting for the Lord to bring her from her hiding place. That is what I would pray for her; the Lord's strength to come boldly before him. Blessings to you.
posted by
roadscross
on April 6, 2007 at 10:48 AM
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ok.. now I am going to want more.. what happened? did you ever speak to her.. is this fiction?
great write! as usual!!!!
posted by
Blue_feathers
on April 3, 2007 at 6:26 PM
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A really intriguing article! Thank you for sharing it.Could you tap her on
her shoulder and offer your name and ask hers! It may break a 'habit'! It may prove valuable-to you and her equaly? It may even be that it is what you went to the church to find?Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 3, 2007 at 3:47 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on April 3, 2007 at 2:26 AM
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Thank you Chilitree!
posted by
give_a_rip
on April 3, 2007 at 2:00 AM
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You definitely got my attention. You write well.
posted by
Chilitree
on April 3, 2007 at 12:32 AM
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A captivating story .
posted by
afzal50
on April 3, 2007 at 12:15 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on April 2, 2007 at 8:17 PM
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