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I liked the rhythm of this sonnet a lot! It was light and breezy, just as I imagine your music would be.  Blessings to you this spring day!

LadyCee

posted by LadyCeeMarie on March 31, 2007 at 4:35 PM | link to this | reply

Neil

Like you I should post more often I try to read as much as possiable , Your Sonnet was wonderful

posted by Kat02 on March 31, 2007 at 1:08 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Moon. I sometimes feel yr. loss & pain intensely. Yet U remind me

of the transcendental practices that U and we can use to rise above the "MAYA" on our planet. shalomfromneil AUMSAIRAM

posted by salem8 on March 31, 2007 at 5:08 AM | link to this | reply

TONYZONIT-Im glad to hear U sing words of kindness & spell Yr name right

shalomfromneil

posted by salem8 on March 31, 2007 at 5:07 AM | link to this | reply

OTA, always refreshing to see your comment or visit

Peace&Thanksfromneil. Shalom--enjoy the sabbath or weekend

posted by salem8 on March 31, 2007 at 5:06 AM | link to this | reply

Chris-Scramble--thank you mi lady

shalomfromneil

posted by salem8 on March 31, 2007 at 5:05 AM | link to this | reply

AFZAL and SUNNY7 thank you

peacefromneil

posted by salem8 on March 31, 2007 at 5:05 AM | link to this | reply

U are right PROC--unless like the President here, U have undying followers

shalomfromneil

posted by salem8 on March 31, 2007 at 5:04 AM | link to this | reply

Chilitree, your name, yr presence, yr generosity of spirit- best of BlogIt

thankyoufromneil

posted by salem8 on March 31, 2007 at 5:03 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful. What??

posted by mark2556 on March 31, 2007 at 5:03 AM | link to this | reply

Mark 2556, your chords and early music stirs my soul into gratitude

shalomfromneil

posted by salem8 on March 31, 2007 at 5:00 AM | link to this | reply

Ethereal musical notes follow you wherever you go YPunday. Angels. Numbers enough perhaps? MoonSpirit

posted by chitravathi_moon on March 30, 2007 at 8:19 AM | link to this | reply

Ypunday

nice one.. made me smile  and tap my toes

posted by OTA. on March 30, 2007 at 6:31 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Neil - your stuff is always fun - and you blog almost every day.

I don't know why the ratings are as they are - it's a mystery to me sometimes.

posted by Antonionioni on March 30, 2007 at 6:18 AM | link to this | reply

Nice one Neil-and the picture too. shalomfromchris.

posted by Scramble on March 30, 2007 at 5:49 AM | link to this | reply

Good post as usual .

posted by afzal50 on March 30, 2007 at 4:57 AM | link to this | reply

Yep.Ive been watching my ratings with great amusement.If you dont find

time to blog everyday you start dropping.lovely poem,by the way

posted by proc on March 30, 2007 at 4:49 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Chilitree on March 30, 2007 at 4:45 AM | link to this | reply

Good chords.

posted by mark2556 on March 30, 2007 at 4:42 AM | link to this | reply