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Thanks PROC, Chris-Scarmble, RICH, Carl, Tony, LadyC, Kat02, all readers

--- I can't keep this up without you. Look at the time; after all the partying I had to come and post on my passions. One of you is to blame (in the best way possible, LOL)

posted by salem8 on March 24, 2007 at 10:01 PM | link to this | reply

lovely poem.Correct me if Im reading it wrong but

it came across as lamenting the gap between the generations????Well put.

posted by proc on March 24, 2007 at 1:03 PM | link to this | reply

This is a lovely poem, YPunday!

posted by Decshak_ on March 24, 2007 at 5:35 AM | link to this | reply

YPunday,

nice.

posted by richinstore on March 24, 2007 at 5:31 AM | link to this | reply

This is just great Neil.I too-love the old fashioned Quills-used to make

them from duck/swan feathers-(not very successfully 'tho)-Lovely.Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 24, 2007 at 4:29 AM | link to this | reply

YP

Quills-  Makes me think of the Marquis, but in your case I'll think of THE MARQUIS DE NEIL.  Mesmerizing, as per your standards. Keeping this short so that I can read more!

LadyCee

posted by LadyCeeMarie on March 23, 2007 at 8:47 PM | link to this | reply

Nice poem.

posted by afzal50 on March 23, 2007 at 8:25 PM | link to this | reply

Quills and Quirks

Lovely work!  I read it five times.  Your photographs are stunning.  Did you take them yourself?

posted by FoliageGold on March 23, 2007 at 4:46 PM | link to this | reply

Good work again, Neil

I see where you're coming from. Long live The Quill!

posted by Antonionioni on March 23, 2007 at 4:38 PM | link to this | reply

Neil

Excellent job your poetry has been very sensual lately good job

posted by Kat02 on March 23, 2007 at 4:28 PM | link to this | reply

Everybody--go to TROOSHA for 8 lines that may inspire U to be a poet! Great

http://www.pique4u.com/images/lasenale_quills.jpg

posted by salem8 on March 23, 2007 at 3:27 PM | link to this | reply

Troosha for those welcome words, Ibring to thee a special gift--to help

with writing on some days...shalom. neil

posted by salem8 on March 23, 2007 at 3:22 PM | link to this | reply

YP

I'm truly enjoying your sonnets.  They are filled with passion and infinite creativity. 

posted by Troosha on March 23, 2007 at 3:09 PM | link to this | reply

I may do that after your welcome visit DOLLS-43

merci beaucoup!

posted by salem8 on March 23, 2007 at 3:09 PM | link to this | reply

YPun

Keep that quill active

posted by Dolls-43 on March 23, 2007 at 3:05 PM | link to this | reply

OTA--I thank thee, Mi Lady. Tried to get a pic of a quill to add (done) & U

were kind and quick to read and comment. Thanks much and Shalom. Neil

posted by salem8 on March 23, 2007 at 2:39 PM | link to this | reply

Wow

this is so good Ypunday!!

posted by OTA. on March 23, 2007 at 2:37 PM | link to this | reply