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Neil

Perhaps a glimpse into your life and feelings beautifully done

posted by Kat02 on March 23, 2007 at 4:33 PM | link to this | reply

Neil--both your words and your pictures-are beautifull!

posted by Scramble on March 23, 2007 at 1:39 PM | link to this | reply

Like the doves/mourning association

good job.

posted by cpklapper on March 22, 2007 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

Did not mean to leave out One Time Soldier--your encouragement is

always good for me and all others writers here. Shalom

posted by salem8 on March 22, 2007 at 10:52 AM | link to this | reply

YP

How lovely - and offering us a little glimpse into your inner struggles and thoughts. 

posted by Troosha on March 22, 2007 at 10:51 AM | link to this | reply

THanks Tonyzonnet, Rich, Bhaskar, PROC....everyone

posted by salem8 on March 22, 2007 at 10:51 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks OTA--you are right, of course.

posted by salem8 on March 22, 2007 at 10:49 AM | link to this | reply

YPunday,

lovely poem.

posted by richinstore on March 22, 2007 at 1:53 AM | link to this | reply

YPunday

An endearingly thought-provoking poem topped by lovely pics. Great!

posted by Bhaskar.ing on March 21, 2007 at 10:50 PM | link to this | reply

thought-provoking poem

and what beautiful pictures.

posted by proc on March 21, 2007 at 7:11 PM | link to this | reply

That was truly beautiful.

posted by 1TimeSoldier on March 21, 2007 at 2:37 PM | link to this | reply

Ypunday

this is beautiful... a peek into you perhaps? 

posted by OTA. on March 21, 2007 at 1:44 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Neil - another feather in your cap - pun intended.

This is really good, like the last one was. Each line says something, it isn't just rhyming for rhyming's sake.

posted by Antonionioni on March 21, 2007 at 1:04 PM | link to this | reply