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Hey Shy--Hey LadyCee--glad u dropped in. Carole I am very glad you move

slowly and carefully (be it in Kansas or anywhere else)! Shalom always

posted by salem8 on March 17, 2007 at 8:17 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely reading. Thanks for sharing

posted by shypettite on March 16, 2007 at 8:57 PM | link to this | reply

YP

I think you have described the self-doubt so many writers feel as they take their 'chisel' in hand start to write, but that the words flow from the pen connected to the soul and Jesus is there, directing, guiding, teaching, at all our doors.  You are asking strength to follow the lessons.  This is very honest and compelling.  I thank you for leaving me such nice comments and the address is the same.  We move very slowly here in Kansas!

Cee

posted by LadyCeeMarie on March 16, 2007 at 8:35 PM | link to this | reply

Well written .Very captivating style .

posted by afzal50 on March 16, 2007 at 5:42 PM | link to this | reply

S-T-T- in that order, thanks much.Chris U got it! I welcome that Dear One

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posted by salem8 on March 16, 2007 at 5:23 PM | link to this | reply

YP

An absolutely stunning sonnet!!!!!   Each word carefully selected and each throught blending into the next. 

posted by Troosha on March 16, 2007 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

I liked the part about crafting a poem (or any art, e.g. a sculpture).

I can relate to that. That's pretty much how I see it too.

posted by Antonionioni on March 16, 2007 at 8:59 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely Neil---in the first verse it sounds a little as 'though you lack

confidence in yourself? (forgive me if I'm speaking out of turn)-I so enjoy all your writings.Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 16, 2007 at 8:57 AM | link to this | reply