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YP

We rediscover rules that we may breach 
This line is every so true - we "poets" stretch the limits and tweak the rules.  Great sonnet, YP.....

posted by Troosha on March 15, 2007 at 9:12 AM | link to this | reply

Go to Villanelle For Deonils

posted by TAPS. on March 14, 2007 at 6:06 PM | link to this | reply

YPunday

A villanelle written just for you.

posted by TAPS. on March 14, 2007 at 6:05 PM | link to this | reply

Very worthwhile dreams and passions, YPunday

posted by TAPS. on March 14, 2007 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

Well done, Neil - I like the ideas of transmitting the rules and the joy to

the younger generation. It's probably more important than we realise.

posted by Antonionioni on March 14, 2007 at 4:06 PM | link to this | reply

posted by salem8 on March 14, 2007 at 3:02 PM | link to this | reply

Clever question Lady C! I love form & formlessness; in and outside the box,

as it were. When one is ready to break the rules, one must pray humbly first---if not to God then to the Muse. It is poor judgment to violate only to amuse...LOL. But I do appreciate all the visits from my esteemed readers. I just posted the latest update on my payment to those I read in the last 30 days. U can find it on BLOG HAIKU if u are curious how many pages I read of each of you. Shalom and Namasthe...the breached rules of signing off by pic!

posted by salem8 on March 14, 2007 at 2:45 PM | link to this | reply

YP-

Pray tell - What rules are to be breached?? The next sonnet? hmmmmm.

Cee

posted by LadyCeeMarie on March 14, 2007 at 2:33 PM | link to this | reply

Neil

Your sonnet had a little bit of everything you did a wonderful job, To desire or love a person can be a beautiful thing , I will ask before I do I wanted to send you some mail and maybe get the chance to talk with you if you like

posted by Kat02 on March 14, 2007 at 12:52 PM | link to this | reply

Style? You got style?

Man, I was lucky to get a rubber nose and inflatible shoes.  Style huh...

man I got gipped.

posted by Whysper on March 14, 2007 at 12:33 PM | link to this | reply

Ypunday

Very Cool! You must tell me how to write a sonnet. I glaze over when I read the rules..

posted by OTA. on March 14, 2007 at 12:31 PM | link to this | reply

Ypunday

very good - we are all rediscovering a lot of styles and genres here.

posted by mneme on March 14, 2007 at 11:00 AM | link to this | reply

YPunday

There are times when rarely can one excel you, my dear friend. Hope everythng is fine, hale, and hearty,

posted by Bhaskar.ing on March 14, 2007 at 10:57 AM | link to this | reply

I love reading your poetry Neil! Just great. Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 14, 2007 at 9:19 AM | link to this | reply

Poerty over flow of powerful feelings .

posted by afzal50 on March 14, 2007 at 7:07 AM | link to this | reply

YPunday,

nice poem.

posted by richinstore on March 14, 2007 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply