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Ypunday

Here you go - haiku for fear and hope:

secret night-time fears
comforting feather softness
enlightened daybreak 

crackling thunderstorm
lightning rending blackened skies
crisp ionised dawn

night-darkened stillness 
menacing shadows dancing
bright morning birdsong

frosted winter glass
sweet siblings softly breathing
hours before dawning

starkly chilled bedroom
deepest midwinter silence
ships' midnight foghorns

snow softly drifting
smothering dreamwork sifting
hope healing heartbreak 

 

 

posted by mneme on March 14, 2007 at 12:26 PM | link to this | reply

Neil
One eye sees eden , I wish i could see with your eyes , missing you

posted by Kat02 on March 13, 2007 at 4:45 AM | link to this | reply

Ypunday
We'll see what we can do..

posted by mneme on March 13, 2007 at 1:31 AM | link to this | reply

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