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John has planned everything so that he got a narrow escape

posted by adventurer02 on July 3, 2015 at 4:16 AM | link to this | reply

I had difficulty with the flow, but the content itself is very good! Brilliant idea with the hole under the van!

posted by adnohr on March 5, 2011 at 3:16 PM | link to this | reply

I so thoroughly enjoyed...
reading your short story.  I  loved the escape route under the caravan ( I take it that is a type of large vehicle)  PS: I'm going to run and spend a few hours tightening up the short story I mentioned on your post but I come back and review some of these lonely gems of yours.

posted by Smittenheimer on July 15, 2008 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

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