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hello

I am intrigue by your writing but mostly by your name, Especially being a male. I have a son that has the same. He has been taunted, here in the U.S. since most caucasian, call their daughters ARIEL. He will be eighteen on aug.26. He is currently in basic training for the army. I will have to show him your artistic quality when he gets back, but most of all so he can learn, that he is not the only male, with that heavenly name. 

posted by araceli on August 16, 2007 at 6:25 AM | link to this | reply

Poignant

Succint and eloquent......

posted by nemonemo on July 19, 2007 at 10:04 PM | link to this | reply

The emotion of the situation is well-wrapped in ur words

posted by Straightforward on April 27, 2007 at 9:30 AM | link to this | reply

Wow

The scene, the emotion, the hopelessness all capured!

posted by Troosha on April 13, 2007 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

heart rending indeed.

Poetry between bars.

posted by marieclaire66 on March 15, 2007 at 9:42 PM | link to this | reply

Well said

Several years ago, I visited my father in a max. security prison. That was one of the most awkward experiences I've ever had. All these emotions flying about the room, some of them unidentifiable, and very few knew how to react to them. It was, indeed, a silent room.

posted by Helen_Bach on March 11, 2007 at 12:52 PM | link to this | reply

Good opening line - any of us could be there.

The drama of humanity goes on and on.

posted by Antonionioni on March 10, 2007 at 1:02 PM | link to this | reply

you paint a vivid picture here..I can smell the cold steel and locked down prison air..

posted by OTA. on March 10, 2007 at 7:16 AM | link to this | reply