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wow, I added you to my list

posted by contagion_publishing on March 1, 2007 at 9:09 PM | link to this | reply

Well written.

posted by afzal50 on March 1, 2007 at 5:06 PM | link to this | reply

it is very soft very true and explained the tender you and when we will become old we forgive more but too many of they had never did ,,,,,the lost steps on the shores and the foot prints in the snow a book of memories we can not forget but we can forgive.....the stranger

posted by NAJWA on March 1, 2007 at 3:56 PM | link to this | reply

This is a lovely piece! You know-you can always 'ask her'!
write to her and ask her-how it was for her! There is no way you could have foreseen in order to 'prepare'.Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 1, 2007 at 1:29 PM | link to this | reply

Great Work!
This poem gave me goose bumps. I really enjoyed that, keep up the good work.

posted by jasoncaron on March 1, 2007 at 11:32 AM | link to this | reply