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Nice Work
Great READ!

posted by jasoncaron on March 1, 2007 at 12:16 PM | link to this | reply

Ariel70
This is so beautiful, so beautiful! Thanks you for sharing.

posted by Justi on February 27, 2007 at 4:30 PM | link to this | reply

.Dave

 

Thank you.

I guess they don't teach kids precis these days, do they? Or anything else much, either!

posted by ariel70 on February 27, 2007 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply

Blonde

 

Ariel blushes ... deeply.

posted by ariel70 on February 27, 2007 at 9:27 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely stuff, Terry. Yes, it's a good exercise too. I like to have a go at comps with maximum word counts and wrote my best piece for a long while recently under a 1000-word limit. Mind you, that's more than one side of A4, but it's the same principle - a careful weighing of words.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on February 27, 2007 at 9:22 AM | link to this | reply

Ariel
Of course they are for someone special......you, silly!

posted by BlondeAmbition007 on February 27, 2007 at 9:19 AM | link to this | reply

Blonde

 

Thank you. Nice roses ... for someone special?LOL

posted by ariel70 on February 27, 2007 at 9:18 AM | link to this | reply

Ariel
That was a beautiful story!

posted by BlondeAmbition007 on February 27, 2007 at 9:11 AM | link to this | reply

rich

 

Thank you very much! Nice to be appreciated.

posted by ariel70 on February 27, 2007 at 7:38 AM | link to this | reply

Tony

 

Well ... maybe, just a bit! Yep, woulda bin, wouldn't it?

Maybe next year ; if I'm still around.

posted by ariel70 on February 27, 2007 at 7:37 AM | link to this | reply

Hi El Tel.
Be honest, this is autobiographical, innit? Eh? Very nice and concise and romantic. Would have been good for Valentine's Day!

posted by Antonionioni on February 27, 2007 at 7:32 AM | link to this | reply

ariel,
that was a very romantic seduction in its refined form. Such a beautiful post.

posted by richinstore on February 27, 2007 at 7:13 AM | link to this | reply

Corbin

 

Glad to have brought a ray of sunshine into your morming. It's been 21C here today.

Eat your heart outLOL

posted by ariel70 on February 27, 2007 at 7:07 AM | link to this | reply

afzal

 

Thank you!

posted by ariel70 on February 27, 2007 at 7:06 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent story . Extemely captivating .

posted by afzal50 on February 27, 2007 at 6:29 AM | link to this | reply

What a bright spot.....
in an otherwise cloudy day!

posted by Corbin_Dallas on February 27, 2007 at 6:04 AM | link to this | reply