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Ariel
May man is constantly slaying dragons- imagined or real - so I'm sure he would empathize. Ahhh.... the bane of a man's existence. Wonderful poem..
posted by
Troosha
on February 22, 2007 at 9:56 AM
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Helen
Uh, huh. Been at the poteen again, have you, colleen?
posted by
ariel70
on February 21, 2007 at 1:49 PM
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I loved your poem, but...
What do you mean there's no such things as dragons??!!
posted by
Helen_Bach
on February 21, 2007 at 12:37 PM
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Good poem.
posted by
afzal50
on February 21, 2007 at 11:01 AM
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star4you
Thank you!
I'm sure Mr marvell's turning in his grave!
Hope I don't meet up with him up there. Or down there!LOL
posted by
ariel70
on February 21, 2007 at 9:43 AM
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strong.,
posted by
star4sky5
on February 21, 2007 at 9:41 AM
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Tony
Phew! You were right! Thanks.
I'll instruct my lawyer, Mr Jaggers, to amend my will.
posted by
ariel70
on February 21, 2007 at 9:40 AM
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thanks ariala
posted by
star4sky5
on February 21, 2007 at 9:40 AM
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Tony
Thank you.
I'll go check now!
posted by
ariel70
on February 21, 2007 at 9:37 AM
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Ariala again.
ER ... wot's a 300ZX? Ain't some kinda wheelbarrow, is it?
Aha! The light dawns! It's some kinda rubber spoon trolley, yes?
posted by
ariel70
on February 21, 2007 at 9:36 AM
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El Tel, is there a word missing from penultimate line? Nice work anyhow!
posted by
Antonionioni
on February 21, 2007 at 9:34 AM
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Ariala
Thank you.
Me, I've got a fifteen year old Renault van.
Hombre pobre, see!LOL
posted by
ariel70
on February 21, 2007 at 9:34 AM
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Ariel, no one has ever bought me a Lexus, but I cried when I first bought
my own 300 ZX LOL Nice work on that poem!
posted by
Ariala
on February 21, 2007 at 9:25 AM
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