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Ariel

May man is constantly slaying dragons- imagined or real - so I'm sure he would empathize.  Ahhh.... the bane of a man's existence.  Wonderful poem..

posted by Troosha on February 22, 2007 at 9:56 AM | link to this | reply

Helen

 

Uh, huh. Been at the poteen again, have you, colleen?

posted by ariel70 on February 21, 2007 at 1:49 PM | link to this | reply

I loved your poem, but...

What do you mean there's no such things as dragons??!!

posted by Helen_Bach on February 21, 2007 at 12:37 PM | link to this | reply

Good poem.

posted by afzal50 on February 21, 2007 at 11:01 AM | link to this | reply

star4you

 

Thank you!

I'm sure Mr marvell's turning in his grave!

Hope I don't meet up with him up there. Or down there!LOL

posted by ariel70 on February 21, 2007 at 9:43 AM | link to this | reply

strong.,

posted by star4sky5 on February 21, 2007 at 9:41 AM | link to this | reply

Tony

 

Phew! You were right! Thanks.

I'll instruct my lawyer, Mr Jaggers, to amend my will.

posted by ariel70 on February 21, 2007 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply

thanks ariala

posted by star4sky5 on February 21, 2007 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply

Tony

 

Thank you.

I'll go check now!

posted by ariel70 on February 21, 2007 at 9:37 AM | link to this | reply

Ariala again.

 

ER ... wot's a 300ZX? Ain't some kinda wheelbarrow, is it?

Aha! The light dawns! It's some kinda rubber spoon trolley, yes?

posted by ariel70 on February 21, 2007 at 9:36 AM | link to this | reply

El Tel, is there a word missing from penultimate line? Nice work anyhow!

posted by Antonionioni on February 21, 2007 at 9:34 AM | link to this | reply

Ariala

 

Thank you.

Me, I've got a fifteen year old Renault van.

Hombre pobre, see!LOL

 

posted by ariel70 on February 21, 2007 at 9:34 AM | link to this | reply

Ariel, no one has ever bought me a Lexus, but I cried when I first bought

my own 300 ZX LOL  Nice work on that poem!

posted by Ariala on February 21, 2007 at 9:25 AM | link to this | reply